Darren Philip
Title: A wonderful coaching event.
Subject: english
The colours were radical, and vibrant,
each player respectively dressed in the color of their choice. A bundle of
talent,of which I must sift through,to find the fittest and most talented of
the bunch. Coach thought to himself, with his manish stance at mid field waiting
to commence practice.
“Bring it in boys,” coach yelled loudly
after sounding the whistle.
“This is the last try out before the
selection of the final sixteen, traveling to Antigua for the keithly shepard
tournament, train hard guys no free buys.” He slightly chuckled, thinking to
himself what an oppourtunity, i could see the potential in every youngster on
the soccer field today. As practice went on, he jotted in his note pad,stocking
the field like a chicken hawk for field mice. After selecting the final sixteen,
he relaxed, a smile emerging, confident in his coaching ability,to select the
best sixteen.
We flew to Antigua fitted in our
dominican track suites, a bright green with yellow trimmings, the boys looked
like stars coach thought. The first game us against St.vincent, coach looked poised and in
control, dictating from the sidelines. Grabbing our first win his energy
blossomed, sholders propped up like a marine, as he shook the hand of the
opposing coach.
The second game against the host country
Antigua made coach angry,he was pieced almost the whole game. Eyes sqinted, jaw
bone recocheting against his cheeks.
“ What are you guys thinking this is the
quarter finals,” coach belted out of his lungs “lets go come on darren you gotta make these attempts
man.” He was furious. I got to sub this kid man he thought to himself.
A few minutes went by then he signaled to
the lines man for a sub, off the field
for to many missed oppourtunities, yelling and screaming.
“That’s it for you and the tournament, your
letting us down.”
Clinching the win we made it to the semi-
finals, coach was less than amused feeling like we should have won by ten. You couldn’t
see the excitement in the semi- final, a seriousness mixed with a mellow mood
of encouragement as coach, coached his way to victory.
The stage was set, the crowd was anxcious
in their seats, the bright beamsof light bedazzling the field. Hurdled in a
circle, coach preached his wisdom,and ended in a small prayer.he had his mind
set on one thing, one thing only, the keithly sheppard cup which came with a
coaches cup to. Right from the start it looked like the kittians would win. They
ran circles around the deffense, argitating coach.
“defense, play
some defense for god sake.” He screamed angrily “get in the game”.
After being pounded for the first thirty
two minutes of the game, and countless attempts by coach to restrategise, the
kittian captain slipped a header pass our goalie. It was like coach just got
stuck with a knife, he sholders dropped and his face sobbered. At the half he
fired up, and let us know what we needed to do. After the halftime show we
looked more like a team scoring in the first ten miutes of the second half. Still
being out ran by the kittians, and looking like he was out of ideas, coach
decieded to go against his deciesion to seat me out. He drilled me on what he
wanted and called a sub out to put me in.
Five minutes left to go in the game, a
ball came from the right side, coach went wild.
“take em on darren,” he shouted.
“You can do it, go go.” He yelled jumping
and screaming running down the side lines, nerves in his throat and heart in
his toe. The amasement tattoed on his face. This is what am here for he
thought. After shaking off the first defender, sciossors dribbling the next and
out running the last, I could hear coach. I could hear the fascination, the joy
the passion and nerves raging in his cheerful inspirational words.
“Left corner, left corner slam it into the
left corner,”he yelled helplessly out of control. After the ball caught the
back of the net, coach dropped to the floor still yelling and screaming like he
just lost a family member. Tears of joy spilled like a floating river. What I came
to do is done. I am the victor coach thought to himself ever so proudly.
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When I was reading it I still felt like you where the one telling the story the only reason I knew it wasn't you was because at the end you said "coach thought to himself" but the entire time I was reading I thought it was from your perspective "darren". If a few little things got said differently it would clear that up. And besides little grammar mistakes i thought it was good
"As practice went on, he jotted in his note pad,stocking the field like a chicken hawk for field mice" This was my favorite line because I dont know what a chicken hawk is and it made me find out what it was and i like it
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